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Just finished playing the VN in one sitting, I was so engrossed in the storyline that I couldn't put it down and to me that makes a fantastic VN already. I can't wait to see what you you come up with next, make sure to take care of yourself too!
Ganon sent me! I meant to just take a little peek, but I accidentally stayed up too late and devoured this whole thing in one sitting. I don't wanna give away spoilers or anything so I'll just say I'm excited to see where it goes :)
AW thank you for your kind words. Sorry for your lack of sleep, but this brings me a devious kind of joy, to know I could write something gripping enough to do that! (Also welcome, friend of Ganon :3)
Hey, I haven't checked this one out yet but I gotta say the visuals look fucking incredible and I cannot WAIT to see what's in store for this story,, Everything seems extremely up my alley, the aesthetic is AMAZING and I've got a really good feeling about the actual narrative itself by the looks of the illustrations, i love me some sci-fi drama and romance! And also the way the outfits are designed is so unabashedly sensual it's just, really fucking endearing, I love it, it's super self indulgent and im all about that, rock on!!
I just played through the game and I have to say wow, this is one of the most unique furry visual novels to come out in a while. The art is great, I really like your use of color it really makes the characters pop out in contrast to the background. The story is very interesting, I have to say the pacing did feel a bit rushed but that's understandable considering you had to cut a good chunk of the story due to the workload. The music is really nice, the heavily auto-tuned voice that plays during the main menu is a nice touch.
I notice that you used some Vietnamese words, like Dawn's last name is Sun Bears in Vietnamese and some other names sound viet to me, nothing noteworthy I just thought it's kinda cool as Vietnamese myself.
Thank you so much! I'm very lucky one of my fav musicians makes her work free to use, so i couldn't help myself in using it in my comic!
Also like, our earth doesn't exist in this setting, but i always imagined Dawn as Vietnamese. (If I'm remembering correctly sun bears live around that area of Asia?) so I thought it was fitting to name them like that :P
I'm yet to play this game but lemme just say that, from the trailer alone, this game (and its characters in particular) feels to me like what my gay brain wanted out of Star Fox. Not the Star Fox that exists in consoles, mind you, I mean the more atmospheric Star Fox that years of nostalgia built up in my head. The one where Wolf O'Donnel isn't an unrepentant, fucked up criminal and where I could just float through space while this song plays.
And the colors remind me of a more cyberpunk/space age Hyper Light Drifter.Sorry if I'm rambling. I should play this game soon-ish and have actual impressions to share. Let's see how far off my initial assumptions were!
no need to apologize! this is a very validating take on the style and vibe of HFTL and I'm glad you told me! I used to write a lot of Starfox fan-fiction, and that has served as some of the basis for this comic for sure! I always wanted to get my paws on the rights to Starfox to make it gayer, so instead of waiting for godot I decided to make my own thing! (also i wanted to add, the menu song for SF64 was played on repeat while i was writing chapter one. definetly a foundational aesthetic moment for my work!)
This is simply a banger, I loved it. I just read the whole 6 chapter without feeling bored a single second, the music is amazing the whole vibe of the game is perfect. istg this game is a master class.I beg you keep the good work
AWE OMG! thank you for your kind words! Truly, I owe a lot of this to the incredible Patricia Taxxon, who makes her music free to use and edit! there are some other artist in there, but if you enjoy the sound of this comic, please go listen to her work :3
I would say it's somewhat nsfw as it is, what with the skimpy clothes and some nudity. As for like... hot, steamy sex scenes though, those will be coming eventually for a Patreon only version.
what about when you eventually finish the game? will you sell the Nsfw steamy patron version as a seperate game from the SFW version? or will you combine them as the final update for all to access?
also that begs another question. upon VN completion, do you plan to open it to the public? or do what most vns have started doing and give the full game to patreons and have everyone else buy the game?
Hey so, I realize this is probably a disappointing answer but I have to be honest. I have no Idea what the plan is with the uncensored release.
as of now the sex scenes are a couple chapters off still, so it might be some time till I make my decision.
That's the short answer, but If you'd like an explanation:
I am no longer sure if I will be making the uncensored Patreon only or if I will simply be uploading it uncensored anyway. I also want to stress that there is no, and never has been a SFW version of HFTL. Nudity and skimpy outfits was always part of the deal, even when it isn't explicitly involving a sex scene. I have no plans to release a version of the comic where this is toned down, sort of as a matter of principle.
This is my dillema: Since I'm writing a Drama / Romance, and not an Erotica, the sex scenes are more about the story than they are about getting off, and because of that they carry some important plot and character development moments. I'm worried that the impact of the experience will be hindered if I don't include them because of this. On the flip side... and at the risk of sounding callous... I do need to pay rent, and paywalling the sex scenes is a way to get people to help fund my work. I feel nasty even saying that though, because I genuinely want people to have easy and free access to HFTL.
I am somewhat leaning towards simply releasing it all uncensored here and keeping it simple, but I haven't made up my mind yet.
No that makes a lot of sense actually and I see where your coming from. Take your time with your decision. Whether or not you combine it all to add to the story is entirely up to you. This is YOUR creation after all; You are the architect of this amazing world and only you can help it reach its full potential.
Plus, Im certain im not the only one to appreciate the fact that you're goal is to make someone invested in reading the story. More to it, you're dream is to have them get invested in more than just the ability to get off. Believe me, Ive seen so many visual novels of late make sex either the focus, or allow the sex to take away from the story. It gets so bad in fact, that even i have found myself simply turning on "Skip Unscene Text" in the settings just so i can skip to the naughty times.
Mind you, im not dogging on sex. That type of connection with the characters can truly increase character development and allow players to invest themselves into not just the stories but the people within them; allowing them to becomes fans, allowing them to dream of themselves going on amazing adventures with what you've created; and most importantly inspire them to even create their own works of art to share with the world.
Im an aspiring Visual Novel Artist myself even. Got my own dream in the works that i one day hope to publish when i work up enough funds to feel comfortable posting it online and sharing it. Mostly, Im great at world building and stuff, but coding? drawing? hell, even actively participating in social media and getting myself out there has terrified me and made it difficult. But i always look on Itch.io and see hundreds of other aspiring artists, some of them hidden gems even, grow and become truly amazing experiences. and it always inspires me!
so just promise us all, that whatever comes your way, bills, life, trauma... hell even just random shit that makes no sense. youll never let that sway you from doing what makes you happy! and above all, as its even become somewhat common knowledge at this point, dont do what the author of BLACKGATE Did. That story was amazing and i loved every moment, yet i fear he will never finish it, and many of us have lost interest, simply because he stopped caring about his dream.
Also, Never feel upset about what your currenty in need of. after the craziness of 2021, and the fact they we are STILL dealing with COVID-19, many of us are struggling. especially artists.
Hell, the sole reason ive never posted my own VN is because i lact the funds to even publish it. I've got the story written (at least the prologue and the story board and plan), but have no artists, nor anyone to help with coding.
that kind of help takes money that just doesnt spawn on trees. So please, do not feel any shame in asking for help with funding. if that means putting on a paywall for us? so be it.
I have to say that I was blown away as soon as I opened the game and heard the main menu music for the first time.
I love the comic book style, and the story so far is intriguing, but what I like most about the game is the sound design! The music is phenomenal, and all the sounds effects and atmospheric sounds are immersive.
I am glad I found this VN and I'll definitely stay to read the rest of the chapters whenever they get added. :D
Aaaa! thank you so much! I do owe so much of to the music, this project wouldnt exist without the work of Patricia Taxxon, so if you love the sound you should def support her! and thank you for your kind words!
Even if there is no choices, I find this very interesting. My only question is, how many chapters are planned? I feel like things are developing fast, but I'm hoping there will be more depth and intrigue as well as suspense.
I'm glad you want more! while it definitely is moving fast, it's because I want to cover a lot of ground, so there will be a bunch of chapters in the future. I'm not sure precisely how many more chapters there will be, but I can forsee at least 12 more ish? Sorry, I dont know specifically how much, haha!
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Just finished playing the VN in one sitting, I was so engrossed in the storyline that I couldn't put it down and to me that makes a fantastic VN already. I can't wait to see what you you come up with next, make sure to take care of yourself too!
Thank you for the kind words and well wishes. I'll do my best to bring this story to life and take care of myself while I do!
This makes me so happy to hear!
Ganon sent me! I meant to just take a little peek, but I accidentally stayed up too late and devoured this whole thing in one sitting. I don't wanna give away spoilers or anything so I'll just say I'm excited to see where it goes :)
AW thank you for your kind words. Sorry for your lack of sleep, but this brings me a devious kind of joy, to know I could write something gripping enough to do that! (Also welcome, friend of Ganon :3)
WoW.!. Good Story
thanks! :3
Hey, I haven't checked this one out yet but I gotta say the visuals look fucking incredible and I cannot WAIT to see what's in store for this story,, Everything seems extremely up my alley, the aesthetic is AMAZING and I've got a really good feeling about the actual narrative itself by the looks of the illustrations, i love me some sci-fi drama and romance! And also the way the outfits are designed is so unabashedly sensual it's just, really fucking endearing, I love it, it's super self indulgent and im all about that, rock on!!
Aw shucks! thanks for your kind words, I'm happy you enjoy what you've seen so far! I hope you enjoy HFTL whenever you get around to reading it!
Id love to look around once the Android release is done:)
I'll have that ready asap! its proven to be one of the more challenging things for me to figure out ^^;
its fine.
Take ur time to do a good job.:)
I just played through the game and I have to say wow, this is one of the most unique furry visual novels to come out in a while. The art is great, I really like your use of color it really makes the characters pop out in contrast to the background. The story is very interesting, I have to say the pacing did feel a bit rushed but that's understandable considering you had to cut a good chunk of the story due to the workload. The music is really nice, the heavily auto-tuned voice that plays during the main menu is a nice touch.
I notice that you used some Vietnamese words, like Dawn's last name is Sun Bears in Vietnamese and some other names sound viet to me, nothing noteworthy I just thought it's kinda cool as Vietnamese myself.
Thank you so much! I'm very lucky one of my fav musicians makes her work free to use, so i couldn't help myself in using it in my comic!
Also like, our earth doesn't exist in this setting, but i always imagined Dawn as Vietnamese. (If I'm remembering correctly sun bears live around that area of Asia?) so I thought it was fitting to name them like that :P
I'm yet to play this game but lemme just say that, from the trailer alone, this game (and its characters in particular) feels to me like what my gay brain wanted out of Star Fox. Not the Star Fox that exists in consoles, mind you, I mean the more atmospheric Star Fox that years of nostalgia built up in my head. The one where Wolf O'Donnel isn't an unrepentant, fucked up criminal and where I could just float through space while this song plays.
And the colors remind me of a more cyberpunk/space age Hyper Light Drifter.Sorry if I'm rambling. I should play this game soon-ish and have actual impressions to share. Let's see how far off my initial assumptions were!no need to apologize! this is a very validating take on the style and vibe of HFTL and I'm glad you told me! I used to write a lot of Starfox fan-fiction, and that has served as some of the basis for this comic for sure! I always wanted to get my paws on the rights to Starfox to make it gayer, so instead of waiting for godot I decided to make my own thing! (also i wanted to add, the menu song for SF64 was played on repeat while i was writing chapter one. definetly a foundational aesthetic moment for my work!)
This is simply a banger, I loved it. I just read the whole 6 chapter without feeling bored a single second, the music is amazing the whole vibe of the game is perfect. istg this game is a master class.I beg you keep the good work
AWE OMG! thank you for your kind words! Truly, I owe a lot of this to the incredible Patricia Taxxon, who makes her music free to use and edit! there are some other artist in there, but if you enjoy the sound of this comic, please go listen to her work :3
hello you didn't set an os on your builds people using the itch app can't download your game :(
Yes. Only chapter 1 is showing up on the itch app....
oh my! i thought that I set an OS for each version since then! sorry about that y'all, I will update that ASAP
Brilliant. Thanks very much.
This vn is soo good! Love everything about it. words cannot express how good it is.
Aw! Omg! thank you for your kind words <3
I like the art work great game play so far!!!
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :3
You're welcome keep up the fantastic work!!!
Is there/will there be NSFW content in this VN?
I would say it's somewhat nsfw as it is, what with the skimpy clothes and some nudity. As for like... hot, steamy sex scenes though, those will be coming eventually for a Patreon only version.
Thanks for the clarification, just wanted to be sure about what I was getting myself into. Good luck with this project
what about when you eventually finish the game? will you sell the Nsfw steamy patron version as a seperate game from the SFW version? or will you combine them as the final update for all to access?
also that begs another question. upon VN completion, do you plan to open it to the public? or do what most vns have started doing and give the full game to patreons and have everyone else buy the game?
Hey so, I realize this is probably a disappointing answer but I have to be honest. I have no Idea what the plan is with the uncensored release.
as of now the sex scenes are a couple chapters off still, so it might be some time till I make my decision.
That's the short answer, but If you'd like an explanation:
I am no longer sure if I will be making the uncensored Patreon only or if I will simply be uploading it uncensored anyway. I also want to stress that there is no, and never has been a SFW version of HFTL. Nudity and skimpy outfits was always part of the deal, even when it isn't explicitly involving a sex scene. I have no plans to release a version of the comic where this is toned down, sort of as a matter of principle.
This is my dillema: Since I'm writing a Drama / Romance, and not an Erotica, the sex scenes are more about the story than they are about getting off, and because of that they carry some important plot and character development moments. I'm worried that the impact of the experience will be hindered if I don't include them because of this. On the flip side... and at the risk of sounding callous... I do need to pay rent, and paywalling the sex scenes is a way to get people to help fund my work. I feel nasty even saying that though, because I genuinely want people to have easy and free access to HFTL.
I am somewhat leaning towards simply releasing it all uncensored here and keeping it simple, but I haven't made up my mind yet.
No that makes a lot of sense actually and I see where your coming from. Take your time with your decision. Whether or not you combine it all to add to the story is entirely up to you. This is YOUR creation after all; You are the architect of this amazing world and only you can help it reach its full potential.
Plus, Im certain im not the only one to appreciate the fact that you're goal is to make someone invested in reading the story. More to it, you're dream is to have them get invested in more than just the ability to get off. Believe me, Ive seen so many visual novels of late make sex either the focus, or allow the sex to take away from the story. It gets so bad in fact, that even i have found myself simply turning on "Skip Unscene Text" in the settings just so i can skip to the naughty times.
Mind you, im not dogging on sex. That type of connection with the characters can truly increase character development and allow players to invest themselves into not just the stories but the people within them; allowing them to becomes fans, allowing them to dream of themselves going on amazing adventures with what you've created; and most importantly inspire them to even create their own works of art to share with the world.
Im an aspiring Visual Novel Artist myself even. Got my own dream in the works that i one day hope to publish when i work up enough funds to feel comfortable posting it online and sharing it. Mostly, Im great at world building and stuff, but coding? drawing? hell, even actively participating in social media and getting myself out there has terrified me and made it difficult. But i always look on Itch.io and see hundreds of other aspiring artists, some of them hidden gems even, grow and become truly amazing experiences. and it always inspires me!
so just promise us all, that whatever comes your way, bills, life, trauma... hell even just random shit that makes no sense. youll never let that sway you from doing what makes you happy! and above all, as its even become somewhat common knowledge at this point, dont do what the author of BLACKGATE Did. That story was amazing and i loved every moment, yet i fear he will never finish it, and many of us have lost interest, simply because he stopped caring about his dream.
After Note-
Also, Never feel upset about what your currenty in need of. after the craziness of 2021, and the fact they we are STILL dealing with COVID-19, many of us are struggling. especially artists.
Hell, the sole reason ive never posted my own VN is because i lact the funds to even publish it. I've got the story written (at least the prologue and the story board and plan), but have no artists, nor anyone to help with coding.
that kind of help takes money that just doesnt spawn on trees. So please, do not feel any shame in asking for help with funding. if that means putting on a paywall for us? so be it.
I have to say that I was blown away as soon as I opened the game and heard the main menu music for the first time.
I love the comic book style, and the story so far is intriguing, but what I like most about the game is the sound design!
The music is phenomenal, and all the sounds effects and atmospheric sounds are immersive.
I am glad I found this VN and I'll definitely stay to read the rest of the chapters whenever they get added. :D
Keep up the great work, Arcadia! <3
Aaaa! thank you so much! I do owe so much of to the music, this project wouldnt exist without the work of Patricia Taxxon, so if you love the sound you should def support her! and thank you for your kind words!
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Amazing work the art and story is great.
Aw, thank you so much! :3
Even if there is no choices, I find this very interesting. My only question is, how many chapters are planned? I feel like things are developing fast, but I'm hoping there will be more depth and intrigue as well as suspense.
I'm glad you want more! while it definitely is moving fast, it's because I want to cover a lot of ground, so there will be a bunch of chapters in the future. I'm not sure precisely how many more chapters there will be, but I can forsee at least 12 more ish? Sorry, I dont know specifically how much, haha!
So, is this a novel or there'll be routes and choices?
This is a kinetic-novel so there wont be any choices.
eventually! I just have to figure out how to make an android version.